You are absolutely correct. Sharks had a go at the following in this order:
800 NAS
RAF
Fisheads
Jerry Pook's book is similar but in this order.
CO HMS Hermes, Cdr (Air), HMS Hermes
Anyone subordinate to the above
CTG (Flag) and his staff
COMAW
FACs
Seaman Officer Branch of the Navy in general.
Non-participant RAF.
Flag in Illustrious post war for asking him to participate in a high-level sweep of the Argentine coast.
Plus a veiled dig at the Shar world for having an easy life and having to cope with boredom as their biggest enemy.