Yes I could write a book about Fred's Story(in fact i am!)
This man should not be flying would be a good tiltle.
What this arrogant instructor should have written in was
This man shouldnt not be flying even though he was a war time devlopment engineer with Rolls Royce and is said to have crashed in more types than most people have flown. This man should not be flying because he is the most popular club member and actively supports the club. This man should not be flying because he loves flying and always has done since childhood. This man should not be flying because he will eventually sink all of his life savings into the reopening of Wellesbourne and loose all of his money, including his house, causing him to have a heart attack and die.
RIP FRED SMITH, THIS MAN DID FLY