Dantruck
Of course my words were too long, but then I am neither a journalist nor a professional pilot and I took no more 2 minutes to write the 86 words.
However, I do review text books in my area of expertise for a respected journal with a 300 word limit and do a considerably better job, IMHO, than the journalist did here, whatever you might say, as I am covering typically the content of 15 chapters as well as making buy/not buy recommendation.
You should re-read your last post; What you are saying is that it is okay to write a story that is misleading.