Tyne,
Thanks so much for your input. In a way, funny how cuts are the same and having the same detrimental effect everywhere.
So many here have repeatedly said, "why not get it proof red by someone who knows?" So, time to stump up. Who is willing to offer an impartial, but informed review of journos' drafts. Take out the obvious bloomers and "just plain wrong words".
I will.
Who else?