Pontius
you're right - it does sound harsh. Hes not asking anyone to write his answer for him, just some suggestions on how to be successful, and if that works, well hey, whats wrong with that?
Deemy, follow WGWs advice, it is very good. Everything needs to be absolutely perfect. Another useful thing to know is that they are looking for certain words or words that convey a sense of determination. Can't help you any more there because it all seems like a long time ago for me.