In no particular order:
- I'm glad to see the list of previous employers. I have no interest however in the duties you performed at Blogs Fast Food.
- List your hours in an easy to read format. And if you put multi-time on your CV and neglect to note the Multi PIC I probably won't look at your CV again. It begs me to ask a question that I would normally ask at the interview you won't be invited to.
- If you can't spell or string a sentence together without errors, it's not likely that I'll be trusting you with important company paperwork. It's all in the detail.
- Got a CV recently from some muppet with a picture of said muppet AND his kids. WTF is that all about??
- Regardless of the reasons you left/were asked to leave your previous positions, put all your previous CP's down as referree's. Everyone makes mistakes. Trust that your prospective employer can see that. If they can't you probably wouldn't want to work there.
That'll do.
D.