Are all those emoticons replacing the 'Are' at the beginning of what could still be made into a sentence, the comma between the two reallys, the question mark where you have a comma, the 'It' after the missing question mark and the full stop at the end?
You use ten emoticons, I can only count six mistakes (if you count the question mark for comma substitution as two). Or had you intended to miss the capital letters off Are and It which would bring you to eight in draft two?
For an eight word 'not actually a sentence' six errors is an amazing effort. I'm not even angry, I'm impressed. I was going to learn 'challenged' prior to leaving the mob, can you PM me a good place for classes?
Give me six over eight as a percentage and I'll let you off.
