Loved the pictures, although the VC10 could have lingered for a bit longer I think...
Commentary did make me cringe a bit; would have been better off with just some music and dates to give people a sense of progression along with footage of important milestones like first Trident autoland, first jet service etc and maybe some more radio chatter to liven it up a bit. BA's long illustrious history can tell itself; it doesn't need a some awkward sounding voice over.