FOD Hazard, mate you hit the nail on the head. I reckon it was good of the bloke to go to the trouble of listing what they look for in applications. If you blokes that got this reply are too arrogant to take advise that is going to help you in your next application then you dont deserve a job. The world doesnt owe u guys a job, you have to earn it, and until you can pull your head out of your ass and realise that, then you will never get far.
And all this crapping on about progression to twins etc. What a load of crap. If you have 250 hours and a CPL you need to wake up and realise that you arent going to be flying an airliner in the next 6 months, despite what your big city flight school told you to get you to train there. So just accept that you are going to have to degrade yourself to fly a plane with less than 100 seats for awhile, regardless of how awesome you think you are.
Unless you are hell bent on flying an airliner, then you wont necessarily need much twin time anyway. There is no shortage of excellent paying single engine jobs out there if you know where to look. Just remember, it doesnt matter how many steps you have to climb to get into the cockpit, at the end of the day, you are still just flying an aeroplane.