A solid - really solid - piece of work; wish I'd written it. Don't necessarily agree with all of it (contractorising DE&S doesn't feel deeply clever) but otherwise it shines a light on the things that MoD wouldn't / doesn't like.
If implemented, this could really work!
However, I rather fear that the MoD will procrastinate until the furore has passed and that then they'll carry on as before - and probably with similar results.
Rant on.
SHOW SOME MORAL COURAGE !!! 
Rant off.
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