Hi Matt...
...my comments were intended to be constructive...not critical! His chances of realising his dream will be immeasurably improved if he learns (sooner rather than later) that carelessness and illiteracy are best avoided. Apart from 3 decades flying fixed wing and rorary types (public transport) I was also heavily involved in selection and recruitment... I am intimately familiar with recruitment criteria and sought only to guide the young guy. OK?