CPP Essay Style
I am planning to applyi for CPP and wish advice from pilot regarding on the "presentation" of the two essays. Facts are facts - no one can change. But I wish to know which is the better way to present those facts, rationally or sentimentally:
Rationally: My interest in aviation starts in xxx and I enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky.....
Sentimentally: Aviation is my dream. I am stepping out to reach for my goal. Flying is amazing....
Which is better?