I've said it before and i'd say it again
If you are looking to read a post ala thesis style, please, just go read academic papers.
If I want opinions about sentence structure, I will consult the real English professor at the university, not some half ass non tertiary qualified team manager who works at Qantas, or some self proclaimed educational expert who really are salad tossers.
I am simply not bothered. I ain't bothered. I ain't bothered and I just could not be bothered with half ass qualified cowboy self proclaimed academia.
I welcome you not to waste your academic skills in these gawd forsaken threads and instead see if your team manager or your manager can place you in some sort of a qantas English class as a typical Qantas half ass non tertiary qualified so called expert, Lord knows how many language speakers in Qantas have such a bad command of English, you'd think Qantas recruit their staff from overseas.
And if your lousy loser management team led by Grant is anything to go by, one wonders when this gawd forsaken company will file for bankruptcy.