Very nicely done. I'm not in the market for a twin but if I were this is the kind of info I'd be looking for. Hope you move it fast and prove the opinion of this forum wrt. the best way of selling.
Just some friendly tips:
- sightly -> slightly
- Under interior you mention Bose instead of Bose-X once. Bose makes more headsets than just the Bose-X.
- Add some highlights from its history, including damage (or mention none if none). Are you the first owner or not, what type of role was it used for, how often did it fly?
- If you have it, a number of oil analysis and compression measurements so that trends can be seen. Particularly since it looks like the engines are close to TBO.
- Pics of the stormscope and moving map GPS
- W&B schedule or at the very least empty weight & MTOM.
- Any current squawks which need to be rectified?
- Add "for sale" to the title (top of the page and in the HTML <title> tag)?
- Maybe some links to reviews, manufacturers page, performance indicators?