I would like to say thank you to everyone for your helpful comments.
Any other criticisms you have, I would be happy to hear them.
I have already begun training (with regards to getting my fitness as high as I can) and will also be reading into what planes the RAF fly with, which squadrons and where they are stationed, etc, etc... but that should be expected
One last question - Eyesight and Tattoos!! I am short-sighted to -0.75. Is this okay?
I also have a large tattoo on my back (it's basically a full back piece) of an Angel. I know in the notes the RAF say "any tattoos that are too big", I don't think you can get much bigger than that! But, it doesn't run onto my neck or hands (or head/face).
Airborne_Aircrew - If I say that about 2 Squadron will it gain be extra points?! haha, just kidding.