No, it's wrong and sloppy RT.
Lengthy waffel? The initial call should be Call sign and what you want to request... thats only..
Giving no request means the ATC has to call you back and ask what you want... If you ask what you want in the first place then he doesnt need to reply with what do you want!?
No ones initial call is going to be G-ABCD blah blah blah c152 blah... you ask what you want.. and then they tell you to pass your details.
If they request you to call with call-sign only then fair be it, but most wont..