Throw a Dyce...
...excuse my spelling, is the term 'assonance' appropriate to your poetry? Rita said to her prof (Micheal Caine), in Educating Rita, "the poet got the rhyme wrong!!!!!".
Assonanace (or however it is spelt) it may be...
MESSAGE PERFECT.
Cheers
NIF. (I'm not naff!)
PS Gonzo, could'nt disagree with you more.
