grammer taliban come and attack your spelling/grammar
What Benjy meant was Ppruners here expect accurate and properly written English commensurate with your stated age and experience. If you read the wanabee's sticky at the top of the page you will read more.
As an aside, I wish people would start:
I am 16 from the UK and looking for a career in the Armed Forces.
I was told to look at this site by . . . . (say how you found the site)
Not getting at you Euro, just for others who look in on your post.