Good luck in the real world. I would suggest the first thing you do is find out what YTS Grammar scheme the young trainee you mentioned is on and join him on Monday morning
Good luck to you as well, May I suggest the first thing Monday morning you go down to the shopping mall and get yourself a life..
I am/was an engineer NOT an English teacher..
I really could not give a toss I left out a few commas.
I am not the one responsible for being the public face of MOD/Veterans Agency.
I suggest if you have nothing better to do with you life than post about missing commas or spelling mistakes, you find a local charity and do some voluntary work.
Or as I suggested earlier...JUST GET A LIFE.. Stupid old fool