I'm newly qualified therefore, of course I'm desperate!
Seriously though, I have taken many of your points on board and I'm currently re-jigging my CV as we speak (type)
It's very difficult to know how to sell yourself when you have so little 'aviation' experience to show. It's even more difficult to make 204 hours total time look appealing.
I shall keep trying, I've invested too much time and effort to give up now!
Regards to you all.
Phil