"Clearance not available, remain OCTA"
Had a good look DP, the words are no longer there in the book, so nobody should hear them.
"EXPECT CLEARANCE AT [blah]"
I think this may have changed a while ago...
All the stuff looks pretty usable in my area. I think there would be some advantage to making all the green lines the same as the dotted brown ones. Easy to say but hard to do.