Jerry.
You obviously have some FANTASTIC footage of Dennis' display.
For me, the film was bitty (bad word I know, but best I can come up with!!!
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Each individual piece was too short. For example when he takes her vertically, and looks as though he's going right over the top, it cuts away to another shot.
I only managed about four minutes of it before my head kinda hurt!!!
I don't really have any film making/video know how, and I also don't know exactly what footage you do have, just think it might be nicer if each bit was longer.
Hope I am not being too critical, feel a little guilty as there was obviously a lot of time and effort put into making it.
