Avmed seems to me to believe that it’s OK to spin the facts in whichever way puts a pilot in the worst light,
Welcome to the world of “Policing.”
They willl never put anything positive “for you” in there... it’s how Police statements and briefs work. They are trying to charge you get get you convicted, so why would they put anything in their brief that may actually help you?
Once it’s there in writing and it is being read by you and others, you can’t simply have it removed and it looks bad. It will even have you thinking you are at fault if you read it enough.