We had been struck by lightening just prior to this which may have been a factor...
Put down 30 degrees of flap. Striker now listen to me.... lift your nose, straighten your wings. You're coming in too fast, watch your speed. You're coming in too hot. Ease up on the throttle. Watch for that crosswind. Aim for the numbers, you'll have to dip your left wing. You're drifting, keep your eyes on the far end of the runway. You're too low damnit! Watch your stall speed. Ease her down, down.
Dave
PS...I just want to tell you both good luck, we're all counting on you.